Poetic Side - 3 Out Of 3

Here is the last extra credit poem that I had emailed to my english teacher.
So, here it is!

Contentment
I had a friend
This friend was the bestest friend a friend could ever have
That was until my friend had traded on me
I thought my friend had my back
But, obviously my friend didn't
Then, I realized something
My friend did the same thing to all it's other friends
My friend name was Jealousy
I think Jealousy caused the war and hatred toward the Americans
I've been looking for my new friend, Contentment
But, she hasn't decided to stop playing Hide & Seek yet
I wonder when Contentment will finish playing her games...?
Because today's society needs her

This is the last poem out of the three poems that I had written for my english extra credit.
Please give me your comments on the 3 poems that I have written.
It will be much appreciated.
&& Thanks for reading my blog!

Poetic Side - 2 Out Of 3

Here is the second poem that I had created for my english's extra credit.
So, here it is!

Money...Money...Money...
Does money make the world go 'round?
Or does the world help money go 'round?
Does money buy you happiness?
Or does happiness buy you money?
Can love be brought?
Or can you find love on your own?
Money seems to be in the way of today's society
Can money answer your questions?
Or can money cause you more problems?
Money...
Money...
Money...
Where would you be without it?

Stay tune for the last poem that I had sent in to my english teacher for extra credit.

Poetic Side - 1 Out Of 3

So in English class, my english teacher had given out an extra credit assignment.
The extra credit assignment was to create three poems about the World && Me.
So, I wanted to post three of the poems that I had created.
[These poems were created by me && I know that I am not the best poet.
But, I still try.
I had hoped that I had some of my mom's poetic skills...
I'll get there someday.
Practice makes almost perfect because no one perfect.]
So, here is #1 poem.

Money Over Peace
As I walk out my front door
I look to my left, my right and what's in front of me
To my left I hear a couple
They are fighting over something stupid
I think they was fighting over money
Then, to my right I hear people shooting
I think they are probably shooting at someone from their rival hood
Then, infront of me I see a girl...
A girl who doesn't have any money, but she wants to be loved
But, she is too busy watching what is happening to the left and the right of her
She is crying out for help
The girl's name was Peace?
Can you find her?