Monday, February 8, 2010

Poetic Side - 3 Out Of 3

Here is the last extra credit poem that I had emailed to my english teacher.
So, here it is!

Contentment
I had a friend
This friend was the bestest friend a friend could ever have
That was until my friend had traded on me
I thought my friend had my back
But, obviously my friend didn't
Then, I realized something
My friend did the same thing to all it's other friends
My friend name was Jealousy
I think Jealousy caused the war and hatred toward the Americans
I've been looking for my new friend, Contentment
But, she hasn't decided to stop playing Hide & Seek yet
I wonder when Contentment will finish playing her games...?
Because today's society needs her

This is the last poem out of the three poems that I had written for my english extra credit.
Please give me your comments on the 3 poems that I have written.
It will be much appreciated.
&& Thanks for reading my blog!

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